<?xml version="1.0" encoding="UTF-8"?><rss version="2.0" xmlns:content="http://purl.org/rss/1.0/modules/content/" xmlns:dc="http://purl.org/dc/elements/1.1/" xmlns:atom="http://www.w3.org/2005/Atom" xmlns:sy="http://purl.org/rss/1.0/modules/syndication/" > <channel><title>Comments on: Sunday Poem #5</title> <atom:link href="http://hiroboga.com/blog/poems/sunday-poem-5/feed/" rel="self" type="application/rss+xml" /><link>http://hiroboga.com/blog/poems/sunday-poem-5/</link> <description>The Flourishing Muse</description> <lastBuildDate>Sat, 04 Sep 2010 15:08:40 +0000</lastBuildDate> <sy:updatePeriod>hourly</sy:updatePeriod> <sy:updateFrequency>1</sy:updateFrequency> <generator>http://wordpress.org/?v=abc</generator> <item><title>By: Hiro Boga</title><link>http://hiroboga.com/blog/poems/sunday-poem-5/comment-page-1/#comment-849</link> <dc:creator>Hiro Boga</dc:creator> <pubDate>Mon, 17 Aug 2009 00:27:22 +0000</pubDate> <guid isPermaLink="false">http://hiroboga.com/?p=887#comment-849</guid> <description>Amy, what a lovely, lyric poem . . . I found myself floating, loosening and floating, held in fluidity, as I read it. Thanks so much for posting! .-= Hiro Boga´s last post ... &lt;a href=&quot;http://hiroboga.com/blog/articles/creative-connections/poetry-creative-connections-articles/sunday-poem-5/&quot; rel=&quot;nofollow&quot;&gt;Sunday Poem #5&lt;/a&gt; =-.</description> <content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Amy, what a lovely, lyric poem . . . I found myself floating, loosening and floating, held in fluidity, as I read it. Thanks so much for posting!<br /> <span class="cluv"> Hiro Boga´s last post &#8230; <a href="http://hiroboga.com/blog/articles/creative-connections/poetry-creative-connections-articles/sunday-poem-5/" rel="nofollow">Sunday Poem #5</a> <span class="heart_tip_box"><img class="heart_tip" alt="My ComLuv Profile" border="0" width="16" height="14" src="http://hiroboga.com/wp-content/plugins/commentluv/images/littleheart.gif"/></span></span></p> ]]></content:encoded> </item> <item><title>By: amypalko</title><link>http://hiroboga.com/blog/poems/sunday-poem-5/comment-page-1/#comment-847</link> <dc:creator>amypalko</dc:creator> <pubDate>Sun, 16 Aug 2009 22:29:45 +0000</pubDate> <guid isPermaLink="false">http://hiroboga.com/?p=887#comment-847</guid> <description>Another poem from my notebook.  This one is the result of the frustration I sometimes feel about my own writing and about wanting to break free from the restrictions a more conventional form of education has imposed upon my use of language.  Hope you like it :-)My Poetry EducationMy poetry education begins with paper and pen and a promise that I&#039;ll allow myself time.Time enough to grow and get it wrong. Time enough to fumble and flail and float....back flat against the water breaking surface tension. I crack open corseted words wrapt up tight; taut as taught. My words drift...Lit offerings on the Ganges, orange points defying the dark. .-= amypalko´s last post ... &lt;a href=&quot;http://www.lessordinary.org.uk/index.php/2009/08/moving-towards-independence/&quot; rel=&quot;nofollow&quot;&gt;Moving Towards Independence&lt;/a&gt; =-.</description> <content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Another poem from my notebook.  This one is the result of the frustration I sometimes feel about my own writing and about wanting to break free from the restrictions a more conventional form of education has imposed upon my use of language.  Hope you like it :-)</p><p>My Poetry Education</p><p>My poetry education begins<br /> with paper and pen and a promise<br /> that I&#8217;ll allow myself time.</p><p>Time enough to grow and get it wrong.<br /> Time enough to fumble and flail<br /> and float&#8230;.</p><p>back flat<br /> against the water<br /> breaking surface tension.<br /> I crack open corseted words<br /> wrapt up tight; taut as taught.<br /> My words drift&#8230;</p><p>Lit offerings on the Ganges,<br /> orange points defying the dark.<br /> <span class="cluv"> amypalko´s last post &#8230; <a href="http://www.lessordinary.org.uk/index.php/2009/08/moving-towards-independence/" rel="nofollow">Moving Towards Independence</a> <span class="heart_tip_box"><img class="heart_tip" alt="My ComLuv Profile" border="0" width="16" height="14" src="http://hiroboga.com/wp-content/plugins/commentluv/images/littleheart.gif"/></span></span></p> ]]></content:encoded> </item> <item><title>By: Hiro Boga</title><link>http://hiroboga.com/blog/poems/sunday-poem-5/comment-page-1/#comment-841</link> <dc:creator>Hiro Boga</dc:creator> <pubDate>Sun, 16 Aug 2009 14:15:09 +0000</pubDate> <guid isPermaLink="false">http://hiroboga.com/?p=887#comment-841</guid> <description>My friend Susan McCaslin, who is a wonderful poet (you can find her at www.susanmccaslin.ca) sent me this poem for our Sunday Poem Circle. Thanks, Susan!&lt;strong&gt;A GLOSA FOR TONI ON HER SIXTIETH BIRTHDAY&lt;/strong&gt;&lt;em&gt;“Quiet friend who has come so far, feel how your breathing makes more space around you. Let this darkness be a bell tower and you the bell. As you ring….”&lt;/em&gt; --Rainer Maria RilkeAfter years of inspecting teeth, gums’ erosions, molar’s chips, the unflossed places where the floss Nazi never comes, something inside you turned, not knowing why, to another profession, another form of attention. Like a jar the hold of your spacious mind cupped all manner of folk, like us who sought the pivot of your steady star, &lt;em&gt;quiet friend, who has come so far. &lt;/em&gt; So you listened, making room for all sorts of ragtag tales, sitting with fresh green grief and loss, that dragonish weight, and darkness of the body shedding time; then, Eureka! Ecology and psychology wed and you brought many to aurora-borealis dew on wet cedars, opening the coffins of moths spilling perfume of broken wings. You taught them on island retreats to &lt;em&gt;feel how your breathing makes more space around you.&lt;/em&gt;It’s never simple venturing into the world. Yet causes collected you, who served them well. This one and that, Mary and Martha twirled, and all became another offered cup, until the rhythm in and out compelled you to return to yourself some latent power, the mystic life, a hidden poem rising from fertile dark, the sweet transforming the sour: &lt;em&gt;Let this darkness be a bell tower.  &lt;/em&gt;Now on this fete-day of your sixtieth year, we gather here to celebrate your being, past, present, future, a unified display, gentle original face within your faces. A singer wants a partner, you with yours, a sweet duet; add more to that— more sing. Call it a quartet; it morphs into a choir; a grand concerto plays in a grand hall. Where voices dim and flare, you are the music’s wing, &lt;em&gt;and you the bell. As you ring….&lt;/em&gt; .-= Hiro Boga´s last post ... &lt;a href=&quot;http://hiroboga.com/blog/articles/creative-connections/poetry-creative-connections-articles/sunday-poem-5/&quot; rel=&quot;nofollow&quot;&gt;Sunday Poem #5&lt;/a&gt; =-.</description> <content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>My friend Susan McCaslin, who is a wonderful poet (you can find her at <a href="http://www.susanmccaslin.ca" rel="nofollow">http://www.susanmccaslin.ca</a>) sent me this poem for our Sunday Poem Circle. Thanks, Susan!</p><p><strong>A GLOSA FOR TONI ON HER SIXTIETH BIRTHDAY</strong></p><p><em>“Quiet friend who has come so far,<br /> feel how your breathing makes more space around you.<br /> Let this darkness be a bell tower<br /> and you the bell. As you ring….”</em> &#8211;Rainer Maria Rilke</p><p>After years of inspecting teeth,<br /> gums’ erosions, molar’s chips,<br /> the unflossed places where the floss Nazi<br /> never comes, something inside you<br /> turned, not knowing why, to another<br /> profession, another form of attention. Like a jar<br /> the hold of your spacious mind<br /> cupped all manner of folk, like us<br /> who sought the pivot of your steady star,<br /> <em>quiet friend, who has come so far.<br /> </em><br /> So you listened, making room for all sorts<br /> of ragtag tales, sitting with fresh green grief<br /> and loss, that dragonish weight, and darkness<br /> of the body shedding time; then,<br /> Eureka! Ecology and psychology wed<br /> and you brought many to aurora-borealis dew<br /> on wet cedars, opening the coffins of moths<br /> spilling perfume of broken wings.<br /> You taught them on island retreats to<br /> <em>feel how your breathing makes more space around you.</em></p><p>It’s never simple venturing into the world.<br /> Yet causes collected you, who served them well.<br /> This one and that, Mary and Martha twirled,<br /> and all became another offered cup,<br /> until the rhythm in and out compelled<br /> you to return to yourself some latent power,<br /> the mystic life, a hidden poem rising<br /> from fertile dark, the sweet transforming the sour:<br /> <em>Let this darkness be a bell tower. </em></p><p>Now on this fete-day of your sixtieth year,<br /> we gather here to celebrate your being,<br /> past, present, future, a unified display,<br /> gentle original face within your faces.<br /> A singer wants a partner, you with yours,<br /> a sweet duet; add more to that— more sing.<br /> Call it a quartet; it morphs into a choir;<br /> a grand concerto plays in a grand hall.<br /> Where voices dim and flare, you are the music’s wing,<br /> <em>and you the bell. As you ring….</em><br /> <span class="cluv"> Hiro Boga´s last post &#8230; <a href="http://hiroboga.com/blog/articles/creative-connections/poetry-creative-connections-articles/sunday-poem-5/" rel="nofollow">Sunday Poem #5</a> <span class="heart_tip_box"><img class="heart_tip" alt="My ComLuv Profile" border="0" width="16" height="14" src="http://hiroboga.com/wp-content/plugins/commentluv/images/littleheart.gif"/></span></span></p> ]]></content:encoded> </item> </channel> </rss>
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