<?xml version="1.0" encoding="UTF-8"?><rss version="2.0" xmlns:content="http://purl.org/rss/1.0/modules/content/" xmlns:dc="http://purl.org/dc/elements/1.1/" xmlns:atom="http://www.w3.org/2005/Atom" xmlns:sy="http://purl.org/rss/1.0/modules/syndication/" > <channel><title>Comments on: Sunday Poem #4</title> <atom:link href="http://hiroboga.com/blog/poems/sunday-poem-4/feed/" rel="self" type="application/rss+xml" /><link>http://hiroboga.com/blog/poems/sunday-poem-4/</link> <description>The Flourishing Muse</description> <lastBuildDate>Sat, 04 Sep 2010 15:08:40 +0000</lastBuildDate> <sy:updatePeriod>hourly</sy:updatePeriod> <sy:updateFrequency>1</sy:updateFrequency> <generator>http://wordpress.org/?v=abc</generator> <item><title>By: Hiro Boga</title><link>http://hiroboga.com/blog/poems/sunday-poem-4/comment-page-1/#comment-723</link> <dc:creator>Hiro Boga</dc:creator> <pubDate>Sun, 09 Aug 2009 23:56:37 +0000</pubDate> <guid isPermaLink="false">http://hiroboga.com/?p=864#comment-723</guid> <description>Kate, thanks for your delightful dog poem. And yes, you&#039;re very welcome to use the Sunday poetry idea for your dog blog. I&#039;m looking forward to reading more from you.xo Hiro .-= Hiro Boga´s last post ... &lt;a href=&quot;http://hiroboga.com/blog/articles/creative-connections/poetry-creative-connections-articles/sunday-poem-4/&quot; rel=&quot;nofollow&quot;&gt;Sunday Poem #4&lt;/a&gt; =-.</description> <content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Kate, thanks for your delightful dog poem. And yes, you&#8217;re very welcome to use the Sunday poetry idea for your dog blog. I&#8217;m looking forward to reading more from you.</p><p>xo Hiro<br /> <span class="cluv"> Hiro Boga´s last post &#8230; <a href="http://hiroboga.com/blog/articles/creative-connections/poetry-creative-connections-articles/sunday-poem-4/" rel="nofollow">Sunday Poem #4</a> <span class="heart_tip_box"><img class="heart_tip" alt="My ComLuv Profile" border="0" width="16" height="14" src="http://hiroboga.com/wp-content/plugins/commentluv/images/littleheart.gif"/></span></span></p> ]]></content:encoded> </item> <item><title>By: Kate Williams</title><link>http://hiroboga.com/blog/poems/sunday-poem-4/comment-page-1/#comment-722</link> <dc:creator>Kate Williams</dc:creator> <pubDate>Sun, 09 Aug 2009 22:08:31 +0000</pubDate> <guid isPermaLink="false">http://hiroboga.com/?p=864#comment-722</guid> <description>Gaping TendernessThe number four Eases curbside, Hiss, pop, Flap doors open, We step in,Doors close. Driver nods at my bus pass, Glances at Hazel, Pulls out onto Division Street.Facing the isle, the faces, Gauntlet of strangers, we stumble To find a seat. She plants her rear between my legs Bracing against staggering stops and starts.A dog on the bus, wearing a cape, In service. Gushing glances skim her soft fur, Hands hunger, arms twitch, Wanting, blood runs warmer, in spots.Unspoken stir, attention gathers, minds Wake up wondering. Is there something wrong with the woman? Is she blind, deaf, epileptic? Concerned, The front-seated move, offering their place.“Can I pet your dog?” Shoulder tap, “M’am, What kind of dog is she, what does she do?” “Is she a service dog? Can I touch her?” “I could never bring my dog on a bus.” “Mommy, look at how her eyebrows twitch.”Life rises, mingles, slips and leaks. Story scatters throughout the vessel. Revealing one mystery: dog, to touch, you, and you, to touch. Dog, god, dog poised to give it away. Bared hearts flail in the isle. Trembling muscles, four-chamber symphonies Glistening, reflecting lament, out Of chests caught gaping for tenderness.The number four Eases curbside, Hiss, pop, Flap doors open, We step out.Warmer, in spots Doors close.Do you mind if I take your Sunday poetry ideas for dog-type poems?Thank you for the invite. I look forward to coming back for more Sunday poetry. .-= Kate Williams´s last post ... &lt;a href=&quot;http://pawinhand.wordpress.com/2009/08/07/first-words-hazel-tribute/&quot; rel=&quot;nofollow&quot;&gt;First Words, with a Poetic Tribute to Hazel&lt;/a&gt; =-.</description> <content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Gaping Tenderness</p><p>The number four<br /> Eases curbside,<br /> Hiss, pop,<br /> Flap doors open,<br /> We step in,</p><p>Doors close.<br /> Driver nods at my bus pass,<br /> Glances at Hazel,<br /> Pulls out onto Division Street.</p><p>Facing the isle, the faces,<br /> Gauntlet of strangers, we stumble<br /> To find a seat.<br /> She plants her rear between my legs<br /> Bracing against staggering stops and starts.</p><p>A dog on the bus, wearing a cape,<br /> In service.<br /> Gushing glances skim her soft fur,<br /> Hands hunger, arms twitch,<br /> Wanting, blood runs warmer, in spots.</p><p>Unspoken stir, attention gathers, minds<br /> Wake up wondering.<br /> Is there something wrong with the woman?<br /> Is she blind, deaf, epileptic? Concerned,<br /> The front-seated move, offering their place.</p><p>“Can I pet your dog?” Shoulder tap, “M’am,<br /> What kind of dog is she, what does she do?”<br /> “Is she a service dog? Can I touch her?”<br /> “I could never bring my dog on a bus.”<br /> “Mommy, look at how her eyebrows twitch.”</p><p>Life rises, mingles, slips and leaks.<br /> Story scatters throughout the vessel.<br /> Revealing one mystery: dog,<br /> to touch, you, and you, to touch.<br /> Dog, god, dog poised to give it away.</p><p>Bared hearts flail in the isle.<br /> Trembling muscles, four-chamber symphonies<br /> Glistening, reflecting lament, out<br /> Of chests caught gaping for tenderness.</p><p>The number four<br /> Eases curbside,<br /> Hiss, pop,<br /> Flap doors open,<br /> We step out.</p><p>Warmer, in spots<br /> Doors close.</p><p>Do you mind if I take your Sunday poetry ideas for dog-type poems?</p><p>Thank you for the invite. I look forward to coming back for more Sunday poetry.<br /> <span class="cluv"> Kate Williams´s last post &#8230; <a href="http://pawinhand.wordpress.com/2009/08/07/first-words-hazel-tribute/" rel="nofollow">First Words, with a Poetic Tribute to Hazel</a> <span class="heart_tip_box"><img class="heart_tip" alt="My ComLuv Profile" border="0" width="16" height="14" src="http://hiroboga.com/wp-content/plugins/commentluv/images/littleheart.gif"/></span></span></p> ]]></content:encoded> </item> <item><title>By: Hiro Boga</title><link>http://hiroboga.com/blog/poems/sunday-poem-4/comment-page-1/#comment-717</link> <dc:creator>Hiro Boga</dc:creator> <pubDate>Sun, 09 Aug 2009 17:02:57 +0000</pubDate> <guid isPermaLink="false">http://hiroboga.com/?p=864#comment-717</guid> <description>Lovely, Douglas, thank you so much for enriching our Sunday Poetry Circle with your poem! I look forward to reading more from you. .-= Hiro Boga´s last post ... &lt;a href=&quot;http://hiroboga.com/blog/articles/creative-connections/poetry-creative-connections-articles/sunday-poem-4/&quot; rel=&quot;nofollow&quot;&gt;Sunday Poem #4&lt;/a&gt; =-.</description> <content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Lovely, Douglas, thank you so much for enriching our Sunday Poetry Circle with your poem! I look forward to reading more from you.<br /> <span class="cluv"> Hiro Boga´s last post &#8230; <a href="http://hiroboga.com/blog/articles/creative-connections/poetry-creative-connections-articles/sunday-poem-4/" rel="nofollow">Sunday Poem #4</a> <span class="heart_tip_box"><img class="heart_tip" alt="My ComLuv Profile" border="0" width="16" height="14" src="http://hiroboga.com/wp-content/plugins/commentluv/images/littleheart.gif"/></span></span></p> ]]></content:encoded> </item> <item><title>By: Douglas Buchanan</title><link>http://hiroboga.com/blog/poems/sunday-poem-4/comment-page-1/#comment-716</link> <dc:creator>Douglas Buchanan</dc:creator> <pubDate>Sun, 09 Aug 2009 16:46:41 +0000</pubDate> <guid isPermaLink="false">http://hiroboga.com/?p=864#comment-716</guid> <description>The Necklace of the GoddessI am a river, flowing endlessly to the sea. My eddies, rocks and waterfalls I once had dreamt were me. But now that dream is ended, My vision clear and free. I know I am a river flowing endlessly to the sea.The ocean is the Goddess. My channel is Father Time. Those eddies, rocks, and waterfalls Are lives I’ve left behind. Each bend conceals a life once lived Reveals the one ahead, Like beads strung on a necklace, And the river is the thread.I am a river, flowing endlessly to the sea; A necklace being strung with lives That all are lived by me. And one day, when I reach that space Where dreams of time are gone, I’ll know I am the necklace When the Goddess puts me on. .-= Douglas Buchanan´s last post ... &lt;a href=&quot;http://www.gatesofhorn.com/blog/trivia_about_v_for_vendetta&quot; rel=&quot;nofollow&quot;&gt;Trivia about V for Vendetta&lt;/a&gt; =-.</description> <content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>The Necklace of the Goddess</p><p>I am a river, flowing endlessly to the sea.<br /> My eddies, rocks and waterfalls I once had dreamt were me.<br /> But now that dream is ended,<br /> My vision clear and free.<br /> I know I am a river flowing endlessly to the sea.</p><p>The ocean is the Goddess.<br /> My channel is Father Time.<br /> Those eddies, rocks, and waterfalls<br /> Are lives I’ve left behind.<br /> Each bend conceals a life once lived<br /> Reveals the one ahead,<br /> Like beads strung on a necklace,<br /> And the river is the thread.</p><p>I am a river, flowing endlessly to the sea;<br /> A necklace being strung with lives<br /> That all are lived by me.<br /> And one day, when I reach that space<br /> Where dreams of time are gone,<br /> I’ll know I am the necklace<br /> When the Goddess puts me on.<br /> <span class="cluv"> Douglas Buchanan´s last post &#8230; <a href="http://www.gatesofhorn.com/blog/trivia_about_v_for_vendetta" rel="nofollow">Trivia about V for Vendetta</a> <span class="heart_tip_box"><img class="heart_tip" alt="My ComLuv Profile" border="0" width="16" height="14" src="http://hiroboga.com/wp-content/plugins/commentluv/images/littleheart.gif"/></span></span></p> ]]></content:encoded> </item> <item><title>By: Hiro Boga</title><link>http://hiroboga.com/blog/poems/sunday-poem-4/comment-page-1/#comment-715</link> <dc:creator>Hiro Boga</dc:creator> <pubDate>Sun, 09 Aug 2009 16:21:55 +0000</pubDate> <guid isPermaLink="false">http://hiroboga.com/?p=864#comment-715</guid> <description>Oh, Heidi, after reading your poem it is indeed good to be alive! Thanks for sharing this lovely poem in our Sunday Poetry Circle. :-)Love, Hiro .-= Hiro Boga´s last post ... &lt;a href=&quot;http://hiroboga.com/blog/articles/creative-connections/poetry-creative-connections-articles/sunday-poem-4/&quot; rel=&quot;nofollow&quot;&gt;Sunday Poem #4&lt;/a&gt; =-.</description> <content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Oh, Heidi, after reading your poem it is indeed good to be alive! Thanks for sharing this lovely poem in our Sunday Poetry Circle. :-)</p><p>Love, Hiro<br /> <span class="cluv"> Hiro Boga´s last post &#8230; <a href="http://hiroboga.com/blog/articles/creative-connections/poetry-creative-connections-articles/sunday-poem-4/" rel="nofollow">Sunday Poem #4</a> <span class="heart_tip_box"><img class="heart_tip" alt="My ComLuv Profile" border="0" width="16" height="14" src="http://hiroboga.com/wp-content/plugins/commentluv/images/littleheart.gif"/></span></span></p> ]]></content:encoded> </item> <item><title>By: Heidi Fischbach</title><link>http://hiroboga.com/blog/poems/sunday-poem-4/comment-page-1/#comment-714</link> <dc:creator>Heidi Fischbach</dc:creator> <pubDate>Sun, 09 Aug 2009 15:39:05 +0000</pubDate> <guid isPermaLink="false">http://hiroboga.com/?p=864#comment-714</guid> <description>Thank you for that beauty! Here&#039;s mine. It&#039;s called August MoonI fell asleep with a full moon beaming on my leg and I could not sleep without writing it down by light of ancient moon and flashlight phone and fan whirling summer onto goosebumps and I said It is good— it is good to be alive. .-= Heidi Fischbach´s last post ... &lt;a href=&quot;http://babayagasplace.squarespace.com/heidi-musings/2009/8/7/what-moves-you-what-turns-you-on-shepard-fairey-at-the-ica.html&quot; rel=&quot;nofollow&quot;&gt;What moves you? What turns you on? Shepard Fairey, at the ICA.&lt;/a&gt; =-.</description> <content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Thank you for that beauty! Here&#8217;s mine. It&#8217;s called August Moon</p><p>I fell asleep<br /> with a full moon<br /> beaming on my leg<br /> and I could not sleep<br /> without writing it down<br /> by light of ancient moon<br /> and flashlight phone and fan<br /> whirling summer onto goosebumps<br /> and I said It is good—<br /> it is good to be alive.<br /> <span class="cluv"> Heidi Fischbach´s last post &#8230; <a href="http://babayagasplace.squarespace.com/heidi-musings/2009/8/7/what-moves-you-what-turns-you-on-shepard-fairey-at-the-ica.html" rel="nofollow">What moves you? What turns you on? Shepard Fairey, at the ICA.</a> <span class="heart_tip_box"><img class="heart_tip" alt="My ComLuv Profile" border="0" width="16" height="14" src="http://hiroboga.com/wp-content/plugins/commentluv/images/littleheart.gif"/></span></span></p> ]]></content:encoded> </item> <item><title>By: Janice Cartier</title><link>http://hiroboga.com/blog/poems/sunday-poem-4/comment-page-1/#comment-713</link> <dc:creator>Janice Cartier</dc:creator> <pubDate>Sun, 09 Aug 2009 14:39:08 +0000</pubDate> <guid isPermaLink="false">http://hiroboga.com/?p=864#comment-713</guid> <description>Oh Amy, Beautiful chords played here. Thank you for that one. .-= Janice Cartier´s last post ... &lt;a href=&quot;http://feedproxy.google.com/~r/JaniceCartier/~3/JDi-xAhtWp8/first-at-bat&quot; rel=&quot;nofollow&quot;&gt;First At Bat&lt;/a&gt; =-.</description> <content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Oh Amy,<br /> Beautiful chords played here. Thank you for that one.<br /> <span class="cluv"> Janice Cartier´s last post &#8230; <a href="http://feedproxy.google.com/~r/JaniceCartier/~3/JDi-xAhtWp8/first-at-bat" rel="nofollow">First At Bat</a> <span class="heart_tip_box"><img class="heart_tip" alt="My ComLuv Profile" border="0" width="16" height="14" src="http://hiroboga.com/wp-content/plugins/commentluv/images/littleheart.gif"/></span></span></p> ]]></content:encoded> </item> <item><title>By: Hiro Boga</title><link>http://hiroboga.com/blog/poems/sunday-poem-4/comment-page-1/#comment-712</link> <dc:creator>Hiro Boga</dc:creator> <pubDate>Sun, 09 Aug 2009 14:28:58 +0000</pubDate> <guid isPermaLink="false">http://hiroboga.com/?p=864#comment-712</guid> <description>Amy, this is beautiful! It evokes so perfectly that mother-ache of love and longing, the rhythms of holding on and letting go of our children, who came from us, from within our bodies, and yet belong first and only to themselves.Thank you so much for this gorgeous poem. .-= Hiro Boga´s last post ... &lt;a href=&quot;http://hiroboga.com/blog/articles/creative-connections/poetry-creative-connections-articles/sunday-poem-4/&quot; rel=&quot;nofollow&quot;&gt;Sunday Poem #4&lt;/a&gt; =-.</description> <content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Amy, this is beautiful! It evokes so perfectly that mother-ache of love and longing, the rhythms of holding on and letting go of our children, who came from us, from within our bodies, and yet belong first and only to themselves.</p><p>Thank you so much for this gorgeous poem.<br /> <span class="cluv"> Hiro Boga´s last post &#8230; <a href="http://hiroboga.com/blog/articles/creative-connections/poetry-creative-connections-articles/sunday-poem-4/" rel="nofollow">Sunday Poem #4</a> <span class="heart_tip_box"><img class="heart_tip" alt="My ComLuv Profile" border="0" width="16" height="14" src="http://hiroboga.com/wp-content/plugins/commentluv/images/littleheart.gif"/></span></span></p> ]]></content:encoded> </item> <item><title>By: amypalko</title><link>http://hiroboga.com/blog/poems/sunday-poem-4/comment-page-1/#comment-711</link> <dc:creator>amypalko</dc:creator> <pubDate>Sun, 09 Aug 2009 14:08:05 +0000</pubDate> <guid isPermaLink="false">http://hiroboga.com/?p=864#comment-711</guid> <description>My Sunday poetic offering...I watch her competent fingers move across the neck of the violin; her right hand manipulates the bow and a sounds emits.It cuts through the kitchen post-dinner malaise and rings true within me, as I sit there at the table, As though I were the instrument...My strings taut and tuned, My fingerboard pressed by fingertips. My insides hollowed out to produce both both music and musician. The wombCreative, yet fallow, reaches forward to claim that which it no longer contains, nurtures or protects. The practiced notes evade its graspIntangible as smoke. .-= amypalko´s last post ... &lt;a href=&quot;http://www.lessordinary.org.uk/index.php/2009/08/and-the-day-came-when/&quot; rel=&quot;nofollow&quot;&gt;And The Day Came When…&lt;/a&gt; =-.</description> <content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>My Sunday poetic offering&#8230;</p><p>I watch her competent fingers<br /> move across the neck<br /> of the violin; her right hand<br /> manipulates the bow and<br /> a sounds emits.</p><p>It cuts through the kitchen<br /> post-dinner malaise<br /> and rings true within me, as I<br /> sit there at the table,<br /> As though I were the instrument&#8230;</p><p>My strings taut and tuned,<br /> My fingerboard pressed by fingertips.<br /> My insides hollowed out to produce both<br /> both music and musician.<br /> The womb</p><p>Creative, yet fallow,<br /> reaches forward to claim<br /> that which it no longer contains,<br /> nurtures or protects.<br /> The practiced notes evade its grasp</p><p>Intangible as smoke.<br /> <span class="cluv"> amypalko´s last post &#8230; <a href="http://www.lessordinary.org.uk/index.php/2009/08/and-the-day-came-when/" rel="nofollow">And The Day Came When…</a> <span class="heart_tip_box"><img class="heart_tip" alt="My ComLuv Profile" border="0" width="16" height="14" src="http://hiroboga.com/wp-content/plugins/commentluv/images/littleheart.gif"/></span></span></p> ]]></content:encoded> </item> </channel> </rss>
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